charm of my words
will take you to another world
a few untold
a few unheard
here it comes the sunset and sunshine
you are welcomed to my word’s paradise……….
love and sorrow
all I share
It’s the only place
I feel to care
my desires,my dreams
and all I want to achieve………
It’s my first attempt to grow up a little
I wish it to grow more
and may not become a riddle
everything to please
and moments to arise
you are welcomed to my word’s paradise………!!!!!!
Wonderful! I have a suggestion, if taken in the right spirit.
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Yes
You can give any suggestion good or bad…
I’ll always welcome and consider your comments as a critic..
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Us din yaad tha, aaj to main bhool gaya.
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Okkk….Koi nai..
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so true…the charm of words! happy blogging
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Thank you for your visit..God bless.
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My pleasure
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