Love is awsome

You took my heart away….

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Blowing with the wind
I saw your flaws
Your tremendous beauty
It seized my heart..

My heart glowed like fireflies
Whenever I looked into your eyes
You seemed indomitable
Imperative for my stay
Oh my dear
You took my heart away…

Bare you hit
The shot of my life
I’d like to retain you forever
And protect from every strife…

Brandishing your hair
When fell over me
They paved many new ways
In my frigid heart
Your memories sway
Oh my love
You took my heart away…

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I'm a teacher by profession and passionate about writing short poems,love poems,short stories and all what makes me feel good.This is my first blog to showcase my writing efforts and to get support from everyone who appreciates newcomers like me.I also own my page on facebook with the name my words which is the best place to express what an introvert can hardly say.

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      2. Sir is not expressing your age here sir..I call you though for your wonderful experience and your awesome writings which are very close to reality..You are a Monsieur, indeed..:-)

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      4. Hahaha…. Thank you! I was just kidding about the age thing 😂 I’m 28 by the way, so I guess I should be used to being called “Sir” now 😜😂 Also I couldn’t just call you anything I want. I prefer addressing my friends by their first names! So, what should I call you? Not “331” I hope! 😂😂😂

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  12. I think it is a beautiful poem as you express very well the loving feelings. I like a lot the lines “my heart glowed like fireflies whenever you looked into my eyes” and Being myself a Dylan fan the first line of the poem becomes meaningful to me. Thanks a lot for sharing!

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